Invitation Wording

Ophelia0326
Ophelia0326
in September 2013 Weddings
Would you guys mind checking my invite wording for any grammar/etiquette/spelling errors? I posted in Invitations and Paper and didn't get much response. FYI, the wedding is formal but not in a church. The placement of FIL's names are to recognize them, they are not co-hosting. Thanks!!

Invite:

Mr. and Mrs. Bob Peter Smith

request the pleasure of your company

at the wedding of their daughter

Mary Jane

to

Mark Edward Jones

son of 

Mr. and Mrs. Dumbledore Aberforth Jones

Saturday, the twenty-first of September

two thousand thirteen

at half past six o'clock

(Location Name)

(Location Address)

(Location City, State) 

Reception immediately following

 

Accomodations:

 

(Hotel Name)

(Hotel Address)

(Hotel Phone)

 

A block of rooms has been reserved for our guests at a special rate. Please reference the Smith/Jones wedding when making your reservations. Kindly reserve your room by August 1, 2013.

 

RSVP card:

 

 

The favor of a reply is requested by the seventh of September

 

M____________

___Accepts with pleasure

___Declines with regrets

 

___Duo of Beef and Chicken

___Vegetarian Entree

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Comments

  • AmandaJoy7686
    AmandaJoy7686
    Accommodations has two 'm's not one. I think the RSVP card should read "Declines with regret" but I guess it depends on the person lol I would assume the guest would know to initial their meal selection but on my RSVP I actually added the wording "Please initial next to your meal choice". It's all up to you.  Everything else looks great!
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  • Ophelia0326
    Ophelia0326
    OMG I can't believe I missed that. Lol, I hope my stationer would catch that one at least! Thanks!!
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